Our Roughcut

This is our Roughcut for our Thriller Opening Sequence. It does not have a soundtrack yet but has all our clips the length and in the order we want them to be in. It also contains some titles which are the first few but there are still a few more to add.

Feedback from our roughcut:
Strengths:

• Editing: Good use of titles(Epic)
  
• Editing: Font was good
  
• Camerawork was good - use of panning, close ups and spinning the camera up towards the tree, clear shots
  
• Genre: The photos and newspaper worked effectively
• Mise-en-scene: Looks real
• Genre: Clear + Good storyline

Weaknesses:

• Sound: No Sound
• Camerawork: too dark maybe??, blurry, final scene unclear
• Editing: Title at the end of the sequence
• Genre: Not always sure of whats going on